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It’s been a few month since the events of the first book, and Lila and her two friends/business partners are getting ready to open their café, The Brew-ha Café. Just like I cherish your mom’s friendship.” I mean, nobody talks like that in real life? *Upon being given some lovely handmade jewelry by a contestant: “Thank you, Naoko,” I said as I put on the bracelets and switched out my hoops for the dangly earrings. And book three isn’t coming in a year, it’s coming in six months! So that’s neat. There is still a lot of room for improvement, but I feel good about continuing the series. I feel like I have a better handle on who she is as a person, where in the first one she was sort of a blank slate. I told myself I would continue with this series if the writing got better in this book, and it did! There were a couple rather tragic instances of dialogue (see below*), but for the most part both the dialogue and inner narration/characterization for Lila got much better.
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